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don_vanecek

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article I wrote for a company newsletter
« on: March 09, 2013, 01:10:20 PM »
I am a Social Service worker for the State of Nebraska (yeah guys 38 plus years).  We recently started a little company newsletter and I have done an article for each issue, this is an article I have written for a summer edition, however it is most likely too long and I expect they will advise me to edit it down a bit, agree or disagree, feel free to comment, perhaps your comment will be helpful if they tell me to shorten it.   

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Re: article I wrote for a company newsletter
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2013, 11:29:43 AM »
Good article! Maybe one thing could be added about maintenance and keeping the cycle in tip top shape to keep you safe! I know you said its a
Bit long but thought I'd throw it out. There are also a couple of repeated lines so maybe another proof read if you havn't sent it in
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Re: article I wrote for a company newsletter
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2013, 10:57:15 PM »
well, I did send it in but it's intended for the issue after the spring issue, I think in another week I will look at redoing it although I thought the committee for the newletter was suppose to have met last Friday.

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Re: article I wrote for a company newsletter
« Reply #3 on: March 13, 2013, 12:25:49 AM »
I didn't mean throw it out! I meant to said just throwing that out there.... I don't know where that came from. but anyways I thought it was a good one!
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